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若安在托福写作当选用辞汇和句型
谚语,即proverb。良多都陪同咱们一起生长,有良多的警世名言都能够利用到写作中,能够给你的文章晋升压服力。谚语的利用普通要注重一下几点:
第一, 要考虑到工具方文明的差别。究竟结果咱们的文章是给本国朋友赏识的,以是要注重谚语的背景。说句不客套的话,咱们高低五千年的汗青长河里流淌了太多的文明,有太多工具让这些心爱的阅卷人看不懂了。
比方:no pain, no gain 不劳无获,no sacrifice , no gain 不入虎穴,焉得虎子
这两个no…no…的针言良多人都晓得,其寄义能够被全天下人接管,以是在TOEFL的文章中被频仍利用。 可是,no hunt, no bark 这个针言,直译过去是说不去狩猎就不须要听到狗叫了,针言里的典故讲的是韩信说过的一句话:鸟尽弓藏,鸟尽弓藏。这句话咱们很轻易懂得,而由于文明背景的区分,从原文懂得起来对东方逻辑有点坚苦,以是不倡议列位在托福的写作中利用。
第二, 学会矫捷地利用谚语。遴选谚语是第一步,接上去的便是你若何去利用它了。比拟罕见的是作为大旨句呈现在段落当中,这个前边提到了一些,比方:Knowledge will never lie 和It’s delightful to have friends from distant lands。表现友情主要性的另有Friendship never sinks即友情之船永不漂浮,等等。
以下供给一些写作中比拟罕见的好的谚语,但愿列位考虑利用。
Practice makes perfect. 游刃有余
Patience is the road to understanding. 懂得万岁
All roads lead to Rome. 条条亨衢通罗马
Attitudes define everything. 立场决议统统
Every coin has its two sides. 有益有弊
One’s meat is another’s poison. 己所不欲,勿施于人
讲了这么多的句型和从句,利用起来也要注重方式,切忌偷梁换柱,强买强卖。我见过良多考生喜好写夸大句,由于格局简略,仿照起来也轻易,可是若是在每个段落都呈现倒装或夸大句,那也就不能凸现夸大的意思了,反而让人感受反复,索然有趣。有些时辰文章的段落里是不须要大篇幅利用从句的,强行参与的从句反而会使句子读起来笔墨繁杂枚举,仿佛承担很重的模样;谚语的利用要谨严谨慎,公道的利用能够让阅卷人对你服气的心悦诚服,自觉的利用能够会让人歪曲你所抒发的意思,以是咱们不要做弄巧成拙的事,对TOEFL文章而言,更多精神要放在段落的全体性上,不须要利用的语法和辞汇就爽性不必,宁缺毋滥。
构想调和布局,布局共同论证,论证琢磨方式,文章才会有全体感和压服力;单词组成句子,句子组成段落,段落组成文章,不只仅针对TOEFL,任何一篇好的文章都不是一个伶仃的个别,而是一点一滴堆集起来的,有一种群拥而起的感受。文章中闪光的辞汇和句型,都是点滴的精髓,使得你的文章能够让人读后有一种赏心好看的感受,若是如许的话,你的作文就胜利了,由于只要读者说好的文章才是真正意思上的好文章。
以下进献一篇IBT托福的群情文范文,文章布局上遵守法则,总分总的格局贯串究竟。内容上句式追求清楚了然,说话也合适first draft的请求,论证则以例证为主导,通篇浏览上去有很好的全体性, 保举列位考生仿照。
Private highway or Public transportation。
I believe that our government should spend more money on transportation. Here is why。
First of all, public transportation such as buses and subways can deliver a great amount of people at the same time. For instance, subways can always transfer hundreds of people to their destinations as soon as possible. Long distance buses will give a handful of help to many people who work in a different city as they live. In addition, local buses are heroes for making our everyday life easier。
Secondly, public transportation can effectively relieve the traffic congestion in rush hour. For example, living in a metropolitan like New York or Toronto, people are highly recommended to take public transportation. Not only the gasoline price today is scaring people away, but they always agree that it can take them forever to get out of a traffic jam in rush hour。
Last but not least, buses and subways today are typically powered by low emission fuels and even electricity. The government should realize that this will make a great contribution to the city’s environment. In the other hand, environmental problem has been raised as a global concern. I think our government should not consider the future impact of car emissions at last; otherwise they will eventually spend more money from their budget to save the environment。
As a matter of fact, highway improvement is somehow required as well. Nowadays, in the city I am living, almost every family owns a car. My parents are living outside the city, they drive to work everyday. In holidays, they will invite me to have a trip. We can plan the trip wherever we want to go. People have more freedom to travel with cars, and it turns out that highways are always occupied during weekend。
To conclude, public transportation requires more attention from our government. For instance, such as the quality of buses, the appropriate increase of routes and the safety concerns。
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