雅思写作高分阐述的体例

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雅思写作高分阐述的体例

　　雅思写作高分阐述须要一些技能，小编将为大师供给履历分享，赞助列位考生在2016年的雅思测验中获得对劲的成就。

雅思写作高分阐述的体例

　　雅思写作测验倡议考生堆集概念要走“邪道”，即：1. 扩展浏览面。浏览中文相干内容也能够或许有用地增添考生的背景常识。2. 堆集同类话题的通用概念。

　　在文章总字数请求稳定的环境下，每一个段落概念数目越多，象征着撑持句的数目便能够或许响应地削减。若是一个段落中含有两个概念，那末每一个概念句睁开一个撑持句就知足字数请求了。

　　如：Charity organizations should give aid to people in the greatest need, wherever they are from, or help people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2010年1月9日A类)

　　Opponents of charity organizations only giving aid domestically, however, contend the assistance should be open to people in need no matter where they are from. To start with, it is the functionality of charity organizations to render help to those who are in great need, regardless of their nationalities. Otherwise, it may be considered as going breach of the purposes they are established for. What is more, not only can international charity assistance enhance the friendship of two nations, but also help eliminate the conflicts and misunderstandings, thereby stimulating the cultural exchanges between countries. (94words)

　　若是一个段落只要一个概念，在坚持段落字数稳定的环境下，撑持句的数目就要响应地增添。

　　如：Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A类)

　　The reason that I oppose to the above view is the unfairness and inequality this proposal may conduce to. As is known to all, historic attractions are owned by all human beings and should be shared by people from all over the world equally and without discrimination. Once this proposal being implemented, an unfavorable impression of this country would be formed in no time. There is a fear that foreign travelers may never come again. Neither do their friends nor those who gain this negative information. And this will inevitably lead to a vicious circle. (95words)

　　是以，在概念较少的环境下，可否将概念充实地睁开成为知足字数请求的关头地点。

　　其次，若何睁开一个概念，关头在于是不是能够或许矫捷应用论证体例。经常使用的论证体例包含：诠释(explanation)，延长(extension)，举例(exemplification)和对照(contrast)等，如：

　　A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. (第二句为诠释论证)(《剑6》Test 4)

　　My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. (第二句为延长论证) (《剑5》Test 2)

　　To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(第二句为举例论证)(《剑8》Test 3)

　　The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (第二句为对照论证)(《剑5》Test 2)

　　以上便是经由过程几个很是具体的例子先容的雅思写作高分技能中若何睁开概念，睁开阐述方面的信息，很是适用。大师在备考本身的雅思写作测验的时辰，经由过程一段时辰的操练，便能够或许把握这个技能了。

　　相干浏览：雅思高文文若何举例子?

　　在雅思测验中，高文文的写作获得高分的规范之一便是有理有据，所谓有理有据便是事理讲的清晰，例子用的适合。上面就让咱们跟从张涛教员，一路切磋一下举证的体例和技能。

　　一、摆现实

　　摆现实是指外行文傍边描写一些本身或熟知的亲朋的履历。如许做的首要目标是用一些细节向考官展现咱们对说话的把握才能，同时，经由过程真人真事引发考官的共识。比方：

　　First, ads disturb our life. Surely, we all have the experience that an insert of the information about a product often interrupts our pleasure of watching an exciting film on T.V, which makes us so annoyed that sometimes we have the impulse to call the T.V station to make a complaint.

　　What’s more annoying is that you have spent money on a newspaper, but you’ll find that most of the space in the newspaper is occupied by all kinds of disgusting ads about a medicine of dealing with sexual diseases, which has totally violated your previous desire of getting the news about what is happening.

　　二、列数字

　　现实上，大师看原汁原味的英文文章会发明良多作者会罗列一些查询拜访和研讨功效来证明本身的概念，由于如许比拟合适西欧国度人的习气，在可托度上和摆现实具备殊途同归之妙。比方：

　　Ad is an effect way to develop economy. As is calculated by the Statistic Bureau of China, 80% of the products in China are promoted and marketed by ads, which has brought almost 20 billion incomes as the tax to the country.

　　Meanwhile, with the prosperity of ads industry, more job vacancies are created and more revenue is added to the GDP of China.

　　三、做援用

　　援用这个词，咱们并不目生，由于咱们中国先生最善于的便是旁征博引，可是现实上，雅思测验傍边，咱们普通不援用名流名言，除非咱们援用的是一个范畴外面最顶尖的权势巨子，是尽人皆知的人，比方孔子、亚里士多德、柏拉图等人的名言;或颠末证明了的，为大大都人以为是正义的名言，和见诸于报纸和电视上的报道等，比方：

　　In recent time, more and more cases have been reported in newspaper and TV programs about the surprisingly increasing rate of children’s crimes. The situation has become so serious that it has aroused great concern of the whole community。

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