初中英语作文《I love my school》评析

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　　I love my school

初中英语作文《I love my school》评析

　　My school is very big with several tall buildings.there are about 800 students in it .We have a big playground with a lot trees around it.In summer ,there are all kinds of flowers everywhere. We have a lot of fun at school. During the breaks,we play games and do sports,such as playing basketball, football and table tennis. All of us students can study hard, obey the school rules ,take care of the school environment. There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. The teachers in the school are kind to us just like our parents.In my heart, the school is like a big family. I like my school and feel proud of it.

　　1.文章誊写情势不标准，但愿注重。

　　2.“there are …”句首字母要大写。应改成.“There are …”.

　　3.My school is very big with several tall buildings.“with”用得恰到益处。

　　4.There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. 应用了不定式作后置定语，很好。

　　5.In my heart, the school is like a big family. 比喻得当。

　　文章语句联贯、流利，句意完全，能操纵较庞杂的句式布局抒发思惟，根基功踏实、薄弱。缺乏的地方在此后进修中要注重标点标记及字母巨细写等纤细题目。

　　整体上看是一篇优异的文章。

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